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Historical Revision
>> Tuesday, June 23, 2009
I went back and revised South Beach Chapters 36 through 39 and left notes warning/announcing that the changes significantly impact the storyline. I have to admit it felt right. I'm not sure I'm going further than that, although there's a hole in the storyline now. I'd rather work around it I think. Haven't made up my mind. And I'm working on the next piece and would prefer to focus on that.
Because I was using png images when I did those chapters, it's a pain to reread them. I wouldn't recommend bothering. It's not necessary since the same issue will be addressed in upcoming chapters.
Although I don't expect any comments on this, I'd welcome boos, hisses, rotten tomatoes, anything really. I'm interested in reactions.
13 comments:
Thanks for the heads up, you know how I feel about revisions, no problem, have done a few minor ones myself.
And again, stunning shots.
Can Ryan smolder and sizzle anymore than he has already? Did not think it was possible.
The changes were not extensive. I hope they made it clear that more than hot looks were exchanged. I added one shot.
Ryan is yes but I think more than sizzle was going on with him. This was one seduction he probably didn't intend to happen. Not then anyway.
These were some of my favorite shots...so natural and really sensual.
That's what I strive for. Natural. Sensual. And emotional.
If I can bring out the emotion, that means more to me than any pose.
thank you Gayl.
and looking back, I realized I never used these two particular shots. well at the time they didn't fit.
I am so glad you did this, Beth! I know you were apprehensive... but I think it turned out really well. Can't wait to see what's coming next. :b
thank you Mao. I didn't change much, just a few paragraphs. I'm really glad you think it worked!
You're so funny, Beth! There's no way I would ever boo your work. Lol! You and Gayl both have incredible talent, and it really shows with these stories! :)
I look forward to rereading through these chapters and seeing what you've done! By the shots you took, it looks like things between Ryan and Beth are still smoldering hot! Lol!
BTW, I'm not sure how else to leave you a message, but you asked me to let you know if I ever added another update to my story. If you're interested... there's no pressure... but I did add a 2nd chapter. It's only fair to warn you though, I still haven't found time to add any pictures. I'm working on that part still.
Hope you're having a great summer! :D
Hi CollieGirl! Oh absolutely I'd love to read it - and you can reach me through the email address Gayl and I set up. It's on the left sidebar and it's called "Contact".
And thank you. The relationship is definitely still simmering along.
Colliegirl, one more thing - it's been a while and I've changed PC's, it may not be easy for me to locate your web site. Would you send it to me again? Thanks!
Lol! I've been having PC problems myself! We had three power outages last week and it seems to have affected a few of my programs-Internet Explorer being one of them. I can't get it to open! It's so aggravating! I'm afraid I'll have to get some professional help for this one. Thank goodness, for my laptop! It's keeping me sane! Lol!
My blog is here: http://izacolliegirl.blogspot.com
Thanks, for showing an interest!
I'll have to remember that "Contact" bar next time! Actually, I think I did try it once, but something wasn't working right with it, or I was confused about how to use it... I don't remember what was wrong anymore. But I'll try it again next time!
Thanks!
That's interesting about the contact link. When I click on it, it brings up an email box. who knows. But the email address is good.
We have so many thunderstorms here - the power goes out all the time. Sometimes it takes quite a bit of fiddling to get things back up and running again.
And thank you for the link to your site!
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